Also, I've started writing some free verse poetry in this new stanza formation that can be read vertically in addition to horizontally, so I thought it would be fun to post up the horizontally organized bits to see how they read. Here they are:
#1
envelop me
toward the intangible
Things that did not
like those shaking atoms
#2
I once read of the Visigoths
throughout the continent
to have been so carefree.
#3
but how
to think I was
#4
Yours
as though we were the same
worthy of adoration
to cover us in white
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Sometimes fragments like these mean something to me, so maybe someone will see this disconnected bits and get something from them. I know I'm curious to see what I myself think in a week or two when I read this page again
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